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Color Example Ch3 - pg6 by TheGodMachineComic Color Example Ch3 - pg6 by TheGodMachineComic
Project/Comic- "The God Machine - Rough Cut Series."
Characters featured- Guy Salvatore, Andrew Matthus, Sith Ryder, Milo
Media- Pencil on comic board/Photoshop

New to the series?
Chapter 1- [link]
Chapter 2- [link]
Chapter 3- [link]
Twitter [tells when comic is updated, where you can buy it, and other related God Machine news.]
:iconthegodmachinesociety: [fan club]

So instead of the next page in chapter 4, i bring you a sneak peak with a comparison with original pencils and the finished color product of pg 6 from chapter 3 [see [link] for commentary]

As you can see, I drastically changed the layout, and even edited out panels [since they come back for the next page [link] ]. Over all it's less chaotic, and moves well.

Also i did this on a live streaming session- something i'm stopping for now. [one person can turn you sour to the whole concept.]

So- why i didn't put the next page up... we're nearing the end of the first graphic novel.. and i'm not sure if i want to give the ending away... I know... but I don't want to cheat a good deal out of the ending and discovering that through the book.. i dunno- still thinking on this.

Anyways let me know what you guys think on the matter.

In teh time being enjoy the previews- regular comic schedule. :)



Nature of project-

The Rough Cut Series is meant to be a preview/web comic of my comic series, "The God Machine." It's taking the original scripts and draft pages, and translating them to pencil only comic pages. There are no inks, formal fonts, or even blacked in areas. The idea behind this is to get you into the series before it comes out to print. Now when the comic goes to print media, you'll see the art work polished, inked, proper lettering, extra jokes, re-writes of the script, sometimes re-ordered panel layout, totally new pages, and bonus material. That way if you really like the project, you won't feel gypped that you'd be buying content that's already free online. Think of this as a preview, and a glimpse into the process in how I make comics.

The God Machine is published by Archaia.
First issue On Sale Now!

More info on the series.

WanderingTempest Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
I remember this page... That was a lot of fun for sure, to watch it streaming live...

...sad to hear that you've stopped the live sessions though. Sucks when one person ruins it for everyone else, but it's your decision and I respect that. Can't help but feel bad that I fell asleep in the middle of the last stream I was watching you do... ^^; Heh, sorry Chan...

I do love how the final page turned out, and I still love how the lil' Chan turned out. I think the Chan Says could give the Langa Keychan a run for her money. ^^
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